If you're planning your novel or have a finished draft and don't know where to begin with revisions, you need to hear this episode.  This is a special two-part discussion with the brilliant book coach, developmental editor, and author Savannah Gilbo as she breaks down the main plot line—or the big picture—in J.K. Rowling's debut and phenomenon, HARRY POTTER AND THE SORCERER'S STONE (HPSS).  In today's high-level discussion, Savannah and I chat about some foundational knowledge that can greatly benefit you when outlining, writing, and revising your book, such as understanding your content genre, the 5 Commandments of Story Telling (Story Grid), and how to identify the main scenes that govern your story. This pieces pulled from this episode come from an interview Savannah and I did with Story Grid for their YouTube channel, which you can watch here.  To do this, Savannah and I first explore the 5 main scenes that make up the global story in HPSS. After, we zoom-in and dissect what we call the skeletal structure of HPSS; in other words, the 20 key scenes that make up the story's main plot line, split into the beginning, middle, and end (also known as Act I, Act II Part I, Act II Part II, and Act III). By the time you finish this episode, you'll have a better grasp on how to use plot and structure to test the strength of a story, all of which is modeled in a masterwork that changed history. The key points made in this discussion also pull from Savannah's recent book, THE WRITER'S STUDY GUIDE: HARRY POTTER AND THE SORCERER'S STONE, which you can purchase by clicking this link. What should you listen to next? Check out Savannah and my analysis of the first chapter in HPSS: First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone.    Connect with Abigail and Savannah: Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

Abigail sits down with Karyn Fischer, a book coach and past literary agent of Bookstop Literary Agency, to discuss narrative voice and how to differentiate a character’s voice in middle grade and young adult novels.  If you’re writing a middle grade or young adult novel—or you get consistent feedback that something is just “off” with your voice—this episode is for you.  Karyn shares specific (and practical) tips that can help you improve your narrative voice, and she even takes a deep-dive into two examples that emphasize when a voice really works, and why it needs to change in order to reflect the age of the protagonist.     As a certified Author Accelerator book coach, and a past literary agent with additional experience as a bookseller and book buyer for an indie bookstore (among various other roles in the industry), Karyn knows how to teach writers how to improve their character’s voice and prose. I don’t want you to miss out! P.S. After you listen to this episode, share it with a writing companion who could use this advice, and don’t forget to subscribe to the show and rate/review it so that Abigail can reach more writers like you who want to blend their passion of writing with business.    Connect with Abigail and Karyn: Website: www.abigailkperry.com |https://www.storyandprose.com/ IG: @abigailkperry |@storyandprose P.S. Check out Karyn’s latest workshop: Revision Confidence!

Join Savannah Gilbo and Abigail for the second part of an inside interview with Tim Grahl, CEO of Story Grid, on our latest book, a masterwork analysis guide to Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone (now available for purchase!). In this interview, we discuss how Rowling created an unforgettable cast of quirky and relatable characters in the Harry Potter series. You’ll learn insights and tips like: How to think about the number of characters you include in your story (and what we can learn from the characters Rowling highlighted in book one). How to write a dynamic cast of characters that can help your protagonist grow and change (and, in Harry’s case, harm or aid his ability to survive). How Rowling layered the forces of antagonism Harry faces in this first book (and why this was necessary based on his age and skill level). How point of view choice affects our interpretation of the events in the story—and influences whether we classify certain characters as “good” or “evil.” And so much more… If you like this episode, you’ll LOVE our book, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone: A Story Grid Masterwork Analysis Guide. Follow the link to order a copy and learn how to improve your writing craft today.

What made Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone a worldwide bestseller? Why does this story still resonate with readers almost thirty years later? And why did Savannah Gilbo and I agree to spend so much time dissecting every single scene and page to find out how and why it works?! Tune into this episode to hear Savannah Gilbo and I talk to Tim Grahl (the CEO of Story Grid) about what it was like to study Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone—why we chose this book, what we learned from our analysis, and so much more. ⭐ Rate + Review + Follow on Apple Podcasts "I love the Lit Match podcast!" ← If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing this show! Your rating and review will help other writers find this podcast, and they're so fun for me to read. Just click here, scroll all the way to the bottom, tap five stars to rate the show, and then select "Write a Review." Be sure to let me know your favorite episodes, too!  🔗 Links mentioned in this episode: Pre-order Savannah's new book, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone: A Story Grid Masterwork Analysis Guide, and get a handful of special bonuses Watch the video interview on Story Grid’s YouTube channel

The third (and final!) analysis in a 3-part episode series!  Abigail and Savannah return for their final first chapter analysis in The Hunger Games series, this time analyzing the first chapter (and scene) of MOCKINGJAY by Suzanne Collins. Learn why they think this first chapter makes a splash, and how it emotionally pulls fans into the final chapter of a high stakes trilogy.  Some key elements they explore include: How can you spell out a crisis without stiffening the stakes?  How does this first chapter set up expectations for the whole story?  How do you write a scene that advances the plot and develops characters? And more...  P.S. If you'd like to learn more about how to start your manuscript with an engaging first chapter, check out the resources that inspired this episode's analysis: Mockingjay by Suzanne Collins The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier  Story Grid by Shawn Coyne Story by Robert McKee    Follow Abigail and Savannah:  Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo  P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY! 

The second analysis in a 3-part episode series!  Abigail and Savannah are back to analyze the first chapter of CATCHING FIRE by Suzanne Collins, the sequel in The Hunger Games phenomenon, and the second analysis in The Hunger Games first chapter deep dive episodes. Come listen to why Abigail and Savannah think this first chapter hooks, and why it sets the stage for arguably their favorite book in the series.  Some key elements they explore include: How does the first chapter set up expectations for the whole book? How can you break down scenes in the first chapter? How do you raise the stakes in a sequel?  How does each scene advance the plot and develop character(s)? Why does this chapter ground readers and entice us to turn the page?  P.S. If you'd like to learn more about how to start your manuscript with an engaging first chapter, check out the resources that inspired this episode's analysis: Catching Fire by Suzanne Collins The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier  Story Grid by Shawn Coyne Story by Robert McKee     Follow Abigail and Savannah:  Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo  P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY! 

The first analysis in what will be a 3-part episode series!  Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the YA dystopian phenomenon, THE HUNGER GAMES  by Suzanne Collins. This is one of Abigail's and Savannah's favorite series....ever...and their passion for this story shines in their discussion about what (1) sets up big picture expectations for the main plot, and (2) what makes the opening pages a great first chapter.  Tune in now to hear Abigail and Savannah's analysis, and don't forget to share your thoughts a you listen! Some key elements they take deep dives on include: 7 key questions to ask about the opening pages (The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier)  Characters we love (and why)  When an opening of a daily routine works Scenes versus beats and how Savannah and Abigail view the difference  How to raise the personal and public stakes (in this first book and in a series)  Plus, more! Come study this juggernaut with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers.  P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories with Savannah and Abigail? Learn more about their virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >>      Follow Abigail and Savannah:  Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo  P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY!    Resources mentioned in this episode:• The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins• The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Abigail sits down with domestic suspense author, Jen Craven—her first *returning!* guest. In Jen's previous episode, Abigail and Jen discussed her writing career as a self-published author. In this episode, Jen talks about her latest books and what it's been like to shift from self-publishing to traditional publishing. Some of the big discussion topics Abigail and Jen explore include: Why Jen decided to switch from self-publishing to traditional publishing  What she likes about traditional publishing and what she needed to let go of What it's like to work with multiple editors at Bookouture How to structure a domestic thriller with high conscience-based stakes vs. life or death stales  How to pitch to a publisher vs. write the back cover copy for Amazon  How to come up with a great hook for your story (and test it) What to consider when choosing a title for a commercial vs. literary book Plus, more!  Regardless of whether or not you want to self-publish or traditionally publish your manuscript, Jen's insights can help you weigh this decision. What key takeaways did you get from this episode?    Read Jen's Books >>   Find Abigail and Jen: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.jencraven.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor Twitter: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor

Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the bestselling and award-winning novel REMARKABLY BRIGHt CREATURES by Shelby Van Pelt. This was one of Abigail's favorite reads in 2023, and there are great reasons it received (and continues to receive) such hype! Together, Abigail and Savannah discuss why these opening pages hook readers and set up big picture expectations for the story. Some key elements they take deep dives on include: 7 Key questions to analyze that set up big picture expectations Voice and "attitude" in POV and narratives  Character development and relationships Small details that work as great set ups for big pay offs Plus, more! Come study this popular book club fiction novel with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers.  P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >>      Follow Abigail and Savannah:  www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo  P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY!    Resources mentioned in this episode:• Remarkably Bright Creatures by Shelby Van Pelt• The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Take out your notepads! Abigail sits down with literary agent Kate McKean for a very special conversation about book publishing contracts. This is a topic that intimidated Abigail early in her career—as it does many writers who are interested in traditional publishing. It's also extremely important for writers to understand what makes a good deal, and who better to learn from than an expert agent with over 17 years experience.  Kate has worked as a literary agent at Howard Morhaim Literary Agency since 2006, where she's built a diverse client list from New York Times best selling internet sensations like I Can Has Cheezburger to beloved humorist and short story writer Daniel M. Lavery to New York Times best selling YA horror writer Madeleine Roux.  Kate is also an adjunct professor at New York University in the School of Professional Studies and a writer herself (rep. by Michael Bourret of Dystel, Goderich, and Bourret). Her ability to talk about complicated topics like publishing contracts in layman's terms is a testament to her teaching abilities and strong communication skills. Some of the key topics in this discussion include:  Contract misconceptions and what to really expect What makes a good deal and what are red flags in contracts Money, rights, and what happens if something goes wrong Payout structures (how writers get paid) General thought process about negotiations Why you should always ask for more Plus, more!  Does Kate sound like the ideal literary agent for you? Send her your query!  Kate's Full MSWL: Review it here Learn more about HML: Visit their website   Read Kate's article on Catapult: "Book Contracts: Let's Talk Rights"  Sign up for Kate's informative email list! >> Enroll here    Follow Abigail and Kate: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.katemckean.com/   IG: @abigailkperry | @kate_mckean X: @abigailkperry | @kate_mckean

Abigail is back with book coach and editor Savannah Gilbo! Today, Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the bestselling fantasy novel FOURTH WING by Rebecca Yarros. Together, they discuss why these opening pages hook readers and set up big picture expectations for the story. Some key elements they take deep dives on include: How to raise the stakes (and why they're so important) Structuring multiple scenes in a single chapter Romantasy as a genre and New Adult as a category Character development and relationships Plus, more! Come study this popular fantasy novel with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers.  P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >>      Follow Abigail and Savannah:  www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo    Resources mentioned in this episode: • Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros • The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Abigail sits down with Megan Tady (Super Bloom, May 2023) to discuss her debut and path to publishing. Humble and resilient, Megan shares her experience and knowledge about a wide range of writing tips from the importance of accountability partners and writing strategies to game-changing mindset tips and what to expect as a published author. Some of Abigail's favorite takeaways include:    How Megan became a story of resiliency   Ways to turn fear and a scarcity mindset into confidence  Why querying is a humbling experience and how to crack a query letter  The publishing gauntlet and what to expect after you publish  Zibby Books and their creative and supportive approach to publishing  Super Boom! (And Megan's next book) More!  What are your favorite takeaways from Megan's interview?  P.S. Buy SUPER BLOOM here >>   Follow Abigail and Megan: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.megantady.com/  IG: @abigailkperry | @megtady

Abigail sits down with Meghan Stevenson (Meghan Stevenson Books) to talk about all things traditional publishing. After an editing career at a traditional publisher, Meghan left her job and started Meghan Stevenson Books (2012). Meghan and her team have helped their clients earn over $5,000,000 in advances from top publishers. In total, their books have sold millions of copies and helped thousands of people.  Packed with experience and knowledge, Abigail discusses big topics with Meghan that can help a multitude of writers interested in traditional publishing, especially nonfiction writers. Some of these include:   3 “P” factors Meghan considers when looking at a literary agent Her agent matchmaking strategy The “Barcelona Rule” and thoughts on the agent-author power dynamic Why Meghan left her role at a traditional publisher but still believes in traditional publishing Main pitfalls of publishing (and what authors can do about them) Traditional publishing myths that need to be busted Does Meghan sound like someone you want to work with? Reach out to her!  Learn more at Meghan Stevenson Books Not sure if you need help? Take Meghan's quiz!    Follow Abigail and Meghan: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.meghanstevenson.com/  IG: @abigailkperry | @megstevenson Twitter: @abigailkperry | 

 Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of Lev Grossman's THE MAGICIANS (and it's a doozy of a first chapter!). Both fantasy lovers, Savannah and Abigail come to this first chapter with a unique approach: Savannah is a super fan of this book and Abigail has only read it once—and several years ago. With these different perspectives, Savannah and Abigail compare their notes to see how this impacts their first chapter analysis and how the opening pages sets up big picture expectations and structures scenes. To do this, they use the 7 key first chapter questions (Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS) and Story Grid's five commandments. Plus, Savannah and Abigail dig into other valuable topics like new adult fiction (is it still a thing?), genre, and how/when to break up multiple scenes in a chapter.  Why do you think the first chapter in THE MAGICIANS hooks readers? We'd love to hear your perspective! P.S. If you enjoyed these first chapter episodes, you might love Abigail and Savannah's virtual book club, Book Notes. Come join us for our next meeting on November 16, 2023. We are studying the mega-popular fantasy book, THE FOURTH WING by Rebecca Yarros. Learn all about it (and join us!) here!  Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

Abigail is back with book coach and editor Savannah Gilbo! Today, Abigail and Savannah sit down to analyze the first chapter of the bestselling fantasy novel A DISCOVERY OF WITCHES by Deborah Harkness. Together, they discuss why these opening pages hook readers—and model other outstanding elements of fiction, some including: A micro-analysis of a well-structured scene (while planting set ups that pay off later in the book) How this chapter sets up expectations for the main stakes in the novel, the genre of the story, and other important details that impact the characters and plot A debate about the Crisis in the scene (and why a Crisis is so important!) Plus, more! Come study this popular fantasy novel with Savannah and Abigail, and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers, and encourage them to read more.    P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes—and sign up for their next meeting!      Follow Abigail and Savannah:  www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo   

Abigail sits down with book coach and memoir writer Suzette Mullen to analyze the prologue and first chapter of Glennon Doyle's bestselling and groundbreaking memoir, UNTAMED. Together, they discuss the differences between memoir and fiction writing—and also why writers can benefit greatly from reading and analyzing both genres.  In addition to their analysis (using the 7 Key First Chapter Questions from Paula Munier's book THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS and the 5 Commandments of Storytelling from Story Grid/Robert McKee), Suzette shares various insights on how to structure memoirs and the vulnerability and courage it takes to write a memoir like Glennon's. Abigail was especially inspired by UNTAMED, and shares many of the unique elements that captured her attention within these opening pages.   Come study a an unforgettable memoir with Suzette and Abigail, and let us know why you think the opening pages hook and move readers—and your analysis of the opening pages.    P.S. Order Suzette's Memoir, THE ONLY WAY THROUGH IS OUT   Follow Abigail and Suzette: Website: www.abigailkperry.com |  https://www.yourstoryfinder.com/  Twitter: @abigailkperry | @suzette_mullen Instagram: @abigailkperry | @urstoryfinder

Abigail sits down with Ariele Fredman, a book publicist turned literary agent at United Talent Agency (UTA). Ariele is actively seeking commercial fiction in: General fiction, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/thriller, Feel-Good Fiction, Women's Fiction, and YA.   Ariele joined UTA after working 12 years at Atria Books, where she worked across genres and launched bestselling campaigns from Colleen Hoover and Fredrik Backman to Zakiya Dalila Harris and Lisa Jewell (among others!). She has an exceptional knack at understanding people and instilling confidence in authors, and she is actively growing her MSWL!   In addition to learning about Ariele's shift from publicist to agent, Ariele sheds light on various writing and publishing topics, some including:   How to empower writers by asking the right questions    How to help writers understand where they best fit in the market   Her perspective on commercial fiction and her mission to expand the genre at UTA  Why voice matters, examples of exemplary voice, and even how to improve your voice in an email  Ways to discover and pitch a story’s hook   How to define and pitch a story’s stakes  And more!  Does Ariele sound like the ideal literary agent for you? Send her your query!  Ariele's Full MSWL: Review it here Learn more about UTA: Visit their website      Follow Abigail and Ariele: Website: www.abigailkperry.com  IG: @abigailkperry | @arielestewart Twitter: @abigailkperry | @arielestewart

A special episode that shares a piece of Abigail and Savannah's May Book Notes meeting!  In this episode, Abigail and book coach companion Savannah Gilbo share a piece of their May virtual book club meeting; they take a deep dive into the first chapter (and prologue) of Tracy Deonn's YA fantasy bestseller LEGENDBORN. Here's a preview of what they discuss: First chapter summary How they split the chapter into two scenes (and why these scenes follow the 5 Commandments of Storytelling from Story Grid/Robert McKee) Legendborn's prologue (and prologues in general) Final thoughts and episode recap  Links mentioned in this episode: Want to join our book club? Click here to learn more! (Our July book club pick is Bonnie Garmus's major hit, LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY!)  Listen to the Fiction Writing Made Easy Podcast with Savannah Gilbo!  Follow Abigail and Savannah:  www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

In this episode, Abigail takes a first chapter deep dive with kidlit book coach and author, Sara Gentry. Together, they discuss the first chapter of C.S. Lewis’s beloved masterwork, THE LION, THE WITCH, AND THE WARDROBE (book two in The Chronicles of Narnia series). In addition to their analysis of how the first chapter (and part of chapter two) sets up big picture expectations and creates a well-structured scene, Sara explains why burgeoning MG fantasy writers can use this book as a masterwork example—but not as a model for MG fantasy stories published in today’s market. To support this, she explains what readers expect (and what publishers want) in recent MG fantasy stories, and how the beginning might read if it were published today.   Come study a portal fantasy and learn how C.S. Lewis’s classic world and adventure, relatable characters, and unique narrative—among other strengths—make this story one that stands the test of time.     Follow Abigail and Sara:  Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://solutionsforwriters.com Twitter: @abigailkperry | @writewithsara  Instagram: @abigailkperry | @writewithsara  

In this episode, Abigail takes a first chapter deep dive with Mystery, Thriller, and Suspense book coach expert and author, Samantha Skal. Together, they discuss the first chapter of Riley Sager's THE HOUSE ACROSS THE LAKE and why its prologue and first chapter hook readers and set up big picture expectations. Plus, Abigail picks Samatha's brain about several elements that make MTS novels special, like how Riley Sager masters misdirection with this bestseller, how to write exceptional plot twists, the difference between mysteries, thrillers, and suspense books—and more!  Even if you don't write MTS, you'll benefit from this episode and all the insights you can learn about conflict, suspense, tension, and entertaining your reader until the end.   P.S. Samantha is hosting a Twists/Reveals how-to class this summer that you don't want to miss! It's called Twists and Reveals in Thrillers - A How To Course and you can learn all about it here.    Follow Abigail and Samantha:  Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.samanthaskal.com/  Twitter: @abigailkperry | @samanthaskal Instagram: @abigailkperry | @authorsamanthaskal

Abigail sits down with author Mikki Brammer to discuss her (amazing!) contemporary fiction/upmarket debut, THE COLLECTED REGRETS OF CLOVER. This story features a socially stunted death doula whose obsession with documenting her clients’ final words sends her on the adventure of her life. This is one of Abigail's favorite reads in 2023—and releases May 9th, 2023! Together, Mikki and Abigail explore Mikki's inspiration for the novel, what it's about, and the many lessons she learned as a burgeoning writer-turned-published author. In addition to an insightful discussion about her book, Mikki sheds light on her querying and publishing experience. Writers in traditional publishing can learn a lot from Mikki as she elaborates on some important topics that pertain to traditional publishing, like: How she researched literary agents  Her querying experience  How she advocates for herself  Why she loves her literary agent and agency What writers should keep in mind when considering who (and where) they query  Her experience working with (three!) editors How to handle feedback  And more!  Whether or not you're writing a book, querying one, navigating the traditional publishing industry, or just love fiction, Mikki has experience—and a debut—that can inspire, comfort, and positively influence you. Buy THE COLLECTED REGRETS OF CLOVER>>   Find Abigail and Mikki: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.mikkibrammer.com/  IG: @abigailkperry | @mikkibrammer Twitter: @abigailkperry 

Abigail sits down with Victoria Marini, a literary agent at Irene Goodman Literary Agency (IGLA). Victoria is actively seeking page-turning fiction for all audiences from middle grade through adult, and is expanding her Upmarket Book Club lists. She enjoys novels with high-concepts and distinctive voices in a variety of genres including: fabulism and fantasy, psychological and domestic suspense, thriller, procedurals, historical (particularly lesser known cultures, peoples, and histories), mystery, literary speculative, magical realism, and horror.  An agent of many genres, Victoria offers a wealth of great advice on various fiction elements. Listen to this episode for great insights on:  Balancing external events with interiority Crafting unforgettable characters When it benefits a writer to temporarily put down their manuscript  The dos and don'ts of tropes  Stories with a rich setting Atmospheric writing and how it creates tone (and even impacts a back cover) Budding questions about the query process  And more! Does Victoria sound like the dream literary agent for you? Review her MSWL and send her your query!    Victoria's Full MSWL: Download the file at the bottom of this page Submit to Victoria: Review the submission guidelines here and then submit to [email protected]    Follow Abigail and Victoria: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.victoriamarini.com  IG: @abigailkperry | @litagentmarini Twitter: @abigailkperry | @LitAgentMarini   P.S. Want to learn more about writing query letters and the query process? Abigail is hosting a workshop on Zoom on April 20, 2023! Learn more or sign up at www.abigailkperry.com/query 

Abigail sits down with indie author Jen Craven (BEST YEARS OF YOUR LIFE) to discuss why she decided to self-publish her book—even though she was getting requests on her manuscript while querying it. Jen makes it very clear that she has nothing against traditional publishing, and that for many authors, this is the best publishing path. (She remains open to publishing differently in the future, but not because she disliked indie). Jen also shares why she decided that her first contemporary book (women's fiction) would do better as an indie book—and then, with explicit details, educates listeners on what she did to "go wide" with her book. Additionally, Jen gives tips on marketing, including how to choose and build a social media platform authentically. Even if your publishing goal is traditional, there are tons of tips on how to balance writing with marketing in this episode, all from an awesome literary citizen and author who does this on a daily basis.      Buy BEST YEARS OF YOUR LIFE>>   Find Abigail and Jen: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.jencraven.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor Twitter: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor

Abigail is joined by nonfiction book coach expert, Barbara Boyd, to analyze James Clear's nonfiction book (a personal growth book) phenomenon, ATOMIC HABITS. What makes this deep dive particularly interesting is that Barbara and Abigail decide to analyze not the first chapter, but the introduction—something Barbara explains is crucial for a nonfiction book and book proposal that hooks a literary agent (and target readers).  They use the 7 Key First Chapter Questions that set up big picture expectations to analyze the introduction. Then, instead of the traditional scene analysis breakdown Abigail uses to analyze the first chapters of fiction books, Barbara teaches what is needed in a nonfiction introduction—and together, they analyze how ATOMIC HABITS exemplifies this.     ATOMIC HABITS by James Clear (pulled from Amazon) The number one New York Times best seller. Over one million copies sold! Tiny Changes, Remarkable Results No matter your goals, Atomic Habits offers a proven framework for improving - every day. James Clear, one of the world's leading experts on habit formation, reveals practical strategies that will teach you exactly how to form good habits, break bad ones, and master the tiny behaviors that lead to remarkable results. If you're having trouble changing your habits, the problem isn't you. The problem is your system. Bad habits repeat themselves again and again not because you don't want to change, but because you have the wrong system for change. You do not rise to the level of your goals. You fall to the level of your systems. Here, you'll get a proven system that can take you to new heights. Clear is known for his ability to distill complex topics into simple behaviors that can be easily applied to daily life and work. Here, he draws on the most proven ideas from biology, psychology, and neuroscience to create an easy-to-understand guide for making good habits inevitable and bad habits impossible. Along the way, listeners will be inspired and entertained with true stories from Olympic gold medalists, award-winning artists, business leaders, life-saving physicians, and star comedians who have used the science of small habits to master their craft and vault to the top of their field. Learn how to: Make time for new habits (even when life gets crazy) Overcome a lack of motivation and willpower Design your environment to make success easier Get back on track when you fall off course And much more Atomic Habits will reshape the way you think about progress and success, and give you the tools and strategies you need to transform your habits - whether you are a team looking to win a championship, an organization hoping to redefine an industry, or simply an individual who wishes to quit smoking, lose weight, reduce stress, or achieve any other goal. Buy ATOMIC HABITS>>   Sign Up for Barbara's Upcoming Memoir Retreat: Mainley Memoir   Find Abigail and Barbara : Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.barbarajboyd.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @babsinrome Twitter: @abigailkperry 

A special episode that shares a part of Abigail and Savannah's latest Book Notes conversation!  In this episode, Abigail and book coach companion Savannah Gilbo share a piece of their latest Book Notes Book Club meeting. Abigail and Savannah started Book Notes, their virtual book club, to teach fiction writers how to read like a writer by (a) reading and analyzing a bestselling book and (b) engaging in a craft-based discussion that spotlights specific elements in fiction that likely made it a popular read.  Here, Abigail and Savannah discuss the first chapter of what they argue is V.E. Schwab's novel masterpiece, THE INVISIBLE LIFE OF ADDIE LARUE. Although their full Book Notes discussion covers the entirety of the book—Abigail and Savannah do not think it would be fair to book club attendees if they shared the whole discussion—this episode features the part of that discussion that is their first chapter analysis. Listen to hear what Abigail and Savannah thought about the first chapter's scene structure and how important details set up expectations for the big picture. If you want to learn how to read like a writer (and simultaneously improve your writing craft), you'll enjoy this episode!  P.S. If you'd like to learn more about Book Notes, and/or join their next book club meeting, you can do so here. The next Book Notes meeting is on:  March 16, 2023 4pm PT / 7pm ET We will study THE GUEST LIST by Lucy Foley   Other Resources to Check Out: The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue by V.E. Schwab  The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier Story Grid by Shawn Coyne  Story by Robert McKee The Guest List by Lucy Foley    Follow Abigail and Savannah:  www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com  @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo  And don't miss Savannah's amazing podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY   

Abigail sits down with Howard Yoon, a literary agent and principal of the Ross Yoon Agency. Howard specializes in narrative nonfiction, history, memoir, science, current events, politics, and popular culture. In this conversation, Howard shares his wealth of expertise in publishing as a nonfiction literary agent and what makes a great nonfiction book. He enlightens Abigail about various topics from important business insights on news like the Penguin Random House trial to craft-focused conversations like what determines an idea that works better as a podcast or blog vs. a nonfiction book.  And that’s only the beginning. Listen to this episode to hear everything Howard teaches and discusses, with some big topics like:  The difference between a nonfiction literary agent and a fiction literary agent  Idea, Market, Writing, and Profile—and how nonfiction literary agents (and authors) assess these four elements to determine if they have a good product  The formula Howard uses to shape a strong nonfiction book proposal  Howard’s MSWL and the layers of needs/desire he considers before signing a client  Publishing and how it merges art and commerce—plus, why agents might be weary of writers who veer too much on one side or the other   The alchemy of publishing and why publishers don’t have a strong relationship with consumers (but are getting better at it)  The DOJ-PRH Antitrust Trial, big reveals that came out of it, results, and what to expect now The pros and cons of publishing with a Big 5 Publisher  The core components of a book proposal    Does Howard sound like the dream literary agent for you? Don't be afraid to query him!    Howard Yoon on Jane Friedman's Roundtable: DOJ-PRH Antitrust Trial *826 nonprofit mentioned >> Donate here to support children with writing, tutoring, and publishing    Some of Howard's Clients and Books: The Mamas by Helena Andrews The Great Air Race by John Lancaster Elizabeth Taylor by Kate Andersen Brower   Follow Abigail and Howard: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.rossyoon.com/howard-yoon IG: @abigailkperry | Ross Yoon Agency (@rossyoon_) Twitter: @abigailkperry | Ross Yoon Agency (@RossYoon)

Abigail sits down with book coach and fantasy writer, Dani Abernathy, to discuss a unique tool that Dani uses with her clients: the Enneagram Personality Test. Many writers love personality tests (Abigail included), but in this episode, Dani shares how to use the Enneagram test effectively—and with this knowledge, it won’t become a resource that sends writers down a research rabbit hole. How does this work? Dani explains how, by deeply understanding the Enneagram test, writers can develop a more diverse cast of personalities in their books. Additionally, writers who better understand their personalities can use this knowledge to their advantage, resulting in a happier, and more efficient writing and publishing process.  Plus, when writers understand the Enneagram of their main characters, they can use it as a tool to develop a character’s wants, fears, and ultimately, decision making abilities—all of which are paramount to a story’s character arc, plot, and ultimate change.   Do you use a personality test to write your books? The Enneagram test might be your next favorite writing tool!    Bonus! Take Dani's Enneagram Personality Test for Writers   Follow Abigail and Dani: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.daniabernathy.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @daniabernathyauthor Twitter: @abigailkperry | @DaniAuthor

Abigail sits down for an insightful conversation about agenting and craft with Senior Literary Agent, Maria Vicente, of P.S. Literary Agency.  While Maria has a love for and strong list of children’s books and graphic novels, she’s also looking to expand her list with adult fiction and nonfiction. Learn about Maria’s MSWL and her agenting style, along with other solid pieces of writing and business advice, in this episode.  Some key takeaways from this conversation include: How Maria got into agenting and some of her favorite responsibilities (like meticulously reviewing contracts)   How involved Maria is in a client’s writing and editing process after becoming a client, and how Maria like to communicate with her clients   Maria’s love for literary fiction and how she differentiates literary fiction from commercial and upmarket  WTF is a literary agent, and why it’s equally important for agents to address basic questions like this one as seasoned questions How writers can decide between traditional publishing and self-publishing—and when one route is better for the individual over the other How to hook readers with first chapters Sentence variation and why this easily enhances narrative voice  Why a writer should consider the literary agent and the agency What to include in a graphic novel script  And more!    Maria Vicente is actively seeking new client. In addition to this episode, visit her website for her full MSWL and more insights. Is she the perfect business partner and advocate for your writing and publishing career? Listen to find out!    Some of Maria's Clients and Books: The Little Toymaker by Cat Min  Nightmare Fuel by Nina Nesseth Hanging With Vampires: A Totally Factual Field Guide to the Supernatural by Insha Fitzpatrick   Follow Abigail and Maria: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.mariavicente.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @agentvicente Twitter: @abigailkperry | @agentvicente

This week's episode deviates from the normal Lit Match episode structure in order to honor the life of Abigail's aunt, Gail Hayes, who was a talented writer, devoted mother and wife, and active fundraiser—some of her many roles in life. Gail (who Abigail called Gigla or Gig) passed away on January 24, 2023 from Glioblastoma (brain tumor) after courageously fighting this disease for 21-months.  In this episode, Abigail pulls her interview with Gail from her first podcast, Story Effect. She interviews Gail about four dominant story-influences on her life, which include THE CRICKET IN TIMES SQUARE, her favorite book, and three of Gail's favorite songs. All of these explore Gail's love for music and how it has an innate ability to connect, inspire, and educate people—even transcend language, although Gail focuses on the words and messages in the book and songs to discuss why they influenced her. Following the interview, Abigail pulls 5 big takeaways and explains why they can teach and inspire writers. With each takeaway, Abigail provides a writing exercise or writing tip(s) that writers can immediately apply to their craft and WIP (work-in-progress).  So, writing friends, take out your notebooks! This episode offers both life and writing lessons you won't want to miss—and all from a kindred spirit who possessed a magical ability to simplify words in powerful and meaningful ways.  Read the full obituary of Gail Hayes  Make a donation in Gail's name to Dana-Farber Cancer Institute Read Gail's Creative Writing Articles on Cooking, "How Do I Love Thee? Let Me Cook the Ways"   Books and Songs Covered in this Episode: THE CRICKET IN TIMES SQUARE by George Selden "World" by Five for Fighting "Hallelujah" by Jon McLaughlin  "Something Beautiful" sung by Stephanie J. Block, written by Stephen Flaherty    Follow Abigail: IG and Twitter: @abigailkperry Website: www.abigailkperry.com 

This week, book coach and developmental editor Savannah Gilbo joins Abigail for a first chapter deep dive analysis of a Colleen Hoover mega-hit, UGLY LOVE. This is also a particularly special episode because it pulls a small clip from the first meeting of Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes.  In this episode, you'll learn how the first chapter of UGLY LOVE gives readers insight into what the Big Picture is all about, and how it works as a well-structured scene that hooks readers. Some key details you'll hear include:  What is this story really about and how does the first chapter hint at this? How many scenes exist in this first chapter? What does the structure of the scene look like? How does each scene advance both plot and character? Plus, more... These first chapter deep dive analysis episodes are designed to help you, the burgeoning writer, learn how to improve and master your craft—especially if you want to polish your first pages before querying your dream agent.   Not sure what UGLY LOVE is about? Read this blurb from the book's back cover on Amazon: When Tate Collins meets airline pilot Miles Archer, she doesn't think it's love at first sight. They wouldn’t even go so far as to consider themselves friends. The only thing Tate and Miles have in common is an undeniable mutual attraction. Once their desires are out in the open, they realize they have the perfect set-up. He doesn’t want love, she doesn’t have time for love, so that just leaves the sex. Their arrangement could be surprisingly seamless, as long as Tate can stick to the only two rules Miles has for her.Never ask about the past.Don’t expect a future. They think they can handle it, but realize almost immediately they can’t handle it at all.Hearts get infiltrated.Promises get broken.Rules get shattered.Love gets ugly.   Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/ P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast for writers: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY 

Today, Abigail brings on a guest who is an avid reader and professional book reviewer—and popular podcast host!—Sarah Dickinson. Together, they take a first chapter deep dive analysis of one of 2022’s most popular books (what NYT called the Best Book of the Year!), and one of their favorite reads in 2022: LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY by Bonnie Garmus. This episode is particularly fun since Sarah, as a reader, shares her analysis based on her reaction as a reader, paired with Abigail's editorial viewpoint.  Come listen to their analysis as they breakdown big first and second chapter hooks like: How the prologue in disguise might not quite work as a scene with a value change—but absolutely hooks readers and works as an engaging, rich opening   Elizabeth Zott, the logical, confident, and depressed chemist/celebrity chef who exemplifies a well-developed character and has inspired countless readers   How the first two chapters encapsulate so much of what readers need to know in order to embrace the big picture  The smart execution of POV and how sharing multiple perspectives about Elizabeth Zott electrified her character (and the story) A breakdown of the scene structure for chapter two (what we called the official chapter one) What Bonnie Garmus hopes women readers take away from LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY, and what she hopes men take away from it  Plus, more!  Email Abigail with your thoughts or share on social media and tag her. Let's continue the conversation!   LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY by Bonnie Garmus (pulled from Amazon) Chemist Elizabeth Zott is not your average woman. In fact, Elizabeth Zott would be the first to point out that there is no such thing as an average woman. But it’s the early 1960s and her all-male team at Hastings Research Institute takes a very unscientific view of equality. Except for one: Calvin Evans; the lonely, brilliant, Nobel–prize nominated grudge-holder who falls in love with—of all things—her mind. True chemistry results. But like science, life is unpredictable. Which is why a few years later Elizabeth Zott finds herself not only a single mother, but the reluctant star of America’s most beloved cooking show Supper at Six. Elizabeth’s unusual approach to cooking (“combine one tablespoon acetic acid with a pinch of sodium chloride”) proves revolutionary. But as her following grows, not everyone is happy. Because as it turns out, Elizabeth Zott isn’t just teaching women to cook. She’s daring them to change the status quo.  Laugh-out-loud funny, shrewdly observant, and studded with a dazzling cast of supporting characters, Lessons in Chemistry is as original and vibrant as its protagonist. Buy LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY>>   Listen to Sarah's Podcast (and episode with Bonnie Grams): Podcast Episode 115: Bonnie Grams (Author of Lessons in Chemistry)   Find Abigail and Sarah: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.sarahsbookshelves.com/sample-page/ IG: @abigailkperry | @SarahsShelves Twitter: @abigailkperry | @sarahsbookshelves

Abigail sits down with book marketing expert (with 13 years Big 5 publishing experience), Andrea DeWerd, to discuss the writing community's mass departure from Twitter.   In this conversation, Andrea explains what's really happening on Twitter, why eight percent of the writing and publishing community have left this platform, and what this means for writers who want to find information about the publishing business, discover agents (among other professionals in the book industry), and sell books.  Andrea also shares insights from her book marketing expertise with specific tools and strategies authors can use to market their books—and make a splash!  Listen to this conversation to learn a wealth of book business-related news and book marketing tips that you won't want to miss, some including: How to use various tools imbedded in technology to market your book What really is happening on Twitter and why the writing and publishing community has left the platform at a higher rate than the US average (8%) Changes in the blue check mark on Twitter and why this might hinder an account's credibility  Twitter alternatives for publishing professionals and why none of them have stuck yet  How to pick the one social media platform that is best for marketing your book What to do if you want a video-based platform but don’t like to be on video  Where writers should turn for information on the book business if the publishing industry leaves Twitter altogether  The difference in social media algorithms and why it is easier to gather a following on Twitter compared to other social media platforms, like Instagram  The amount of time you need to market your book before you launch it if you want to make a splash     What are your biggest takeaways from Andrea's insights? Abigail would love to know!  P.S. Abigail’s email list is up and running! If you’d like to be the first to hear about new podcast episodes, insight on the publishing industry, and writing tips, be sure to sign up at www.abigailkperry.com    Follow Abigail and Andrea: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://ajdewerd.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @ajdewerd Twitter: @abigailkperry | @ajdewerd  

Come join Abigail and certified book coach, Rona Gofstein, as they analyze the first chapter of bestselling author Jasmine Guillory’s USA Today bestselling novel, THE WEDDING DATE.   Abigail and Rona explore many of the important elements of contemporary romance, as well as what makes this first chapter so engaging. Read the first chapter, listen to this conversation, and join Abigail and Rona as they share their craft knowledge and observations. In today’s episode, you’ll learn:  How the first chapter of TWD sets up expectations for the big picture, using the 7 Key First Chapter Questions from Paula Munier’s book THE WRITER’S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS   What makes contemporary romance a popular genre   The difference between the hero's journey and the heroine's journey    How an interesting POV shift, but not a scene change, works in these first pages   What makes this a well-structured first scene  And, more!  Email Abigail with your thoughts or share on social media and tag her. Let's continue the conversation!     THE WEDDING DATE by Jasmine Guillory (pulled from Amazon) Agreeing to go to a wedding with a guy she gets stuck with in an elevator is something Alexa Monroe wouldn't normally do. But there's something about Drew Nichols that's too hard to resist. On the eve of his ex's wedding festivities, Drew is minus a plus one. Until a power outage strands him with the perfect candidate for a fake girlfriend.... After Alexa and Drew have more fun than they ever thought possible, Drew has to fly back to Los Angeles and his job as a pediatric surgeon, and Alexa heads home to Berkeley, where she's the mayor's chief of staff. Too bad they can't stop thinking about the other.... They're just two high-powered professionals on a collision course toward the long distance dating disaster of the century--or closing the gap between what they think they need and what they truly want.... Buy THE WEDDING DATE>>   Find Abigail and Rona: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://ronagofstein.com IG: @abigailkperry | @write.with.rona Twitter: @abigailkperry | @ronathewriter 

Join Abigail as she interviews CeCe Lyra, Associate Literary Agent at P.S. Literary Agency and the brilliant co-host of the popular writing podcast, The Shit No One Tells You About Writing. Abigail’s said it in more places than one: This conversation will be one that Abigail thinks about (and refers back to) for many, many years.  Here are some of the multitude of important, insightful topics CeCe covers—like the writing process, the realities of the publishing industry, and even questions that will make you reflect about yourself and your story beyond writing and publishing a book:    CeCe’s path to publishing (and why she LOVES her job) CeCe’s MSWL, her eclectic taste in adult fiction and nonfiction (from really, really dark and gritty to fun and uplifting…and any book that makes you feel empowered)  Why publishing is such at competitive industry, and at the same time, why comparing yourself to other writers and authors will only hold you back  Examples of good writing and why books need to reach a certain caliber before catching an agent’s or editor’s attention  How CeCe brainstorms story ideas with her clients, offers notes, and supports them in every step Layered stories: What this means and the how’s and why’s of mastering this skill  Why you shouldn’t obsess about writing a book fast Finding hard statistics and why an awareness of how the industry works is crucial for published authors Discovering your greatest privilege as a writer (and why you should reflect on this)   What was your biggest takeaway from CeCe’s interview?  Email Abigail, she'd love to hear from you!  P.S. Abigail’s email list is up and running! If you’d like to be the first to hear about new podcast episodes, insight on the publishing industry, and writing tips, be sure to sign up at www.abigailkperry.com    CeCe’s Wishlist: https://cecilialyra.com/query-wishlist/ Query CeCe: https://www.psliterary.com/submissions/ More Articles with CeCe: Latinos in Publishing  Women in Our Town   Follow Abigail and CeCe: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://cecilialyra.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @cece_lyra_agent Twitter: @abigailkperry | @ceciliaclyra

Come join Abigail and USA Today bestselling author, Jennifer Klepper, as they perform a first chapter deep dive analysis of Celeste Ng’s bestselling masterpiece, LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE. Abigail and Jennifer agree, Celeste Ng is an exceptional author and LFE is a book that every writer can learn from. And the first pages prove why. Abigail admits that she found this scene particularly challenging to analyze, and she’s curious what YOU think. Read the first chapter, listen to this conversation, and let her know!  In today’s episode, you’ll learn: How the first chapter of LFE sets up expectations for the big picture, using the 7 Key First Chapter Questions from Paula Munier’s book THE WRITER’S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS  Why Shaker Heights provides the perfect setting for an inciting incident that blows up this small-town world  How Celeste Ng masters multi-POV without distracting the reader (even with changing perspectives within the same paragraph)  How a Crisis can work—and not necessarily “belong” to the central protagonist in the scene  Options for how five commandments play out in engaging scene structure that advances the plot and develops character and conflict  Plus, more!  Come study the first pages of Ng’s award-winning and bestselling work of literary fiction/domestic suspense. And then let us know, how do you think the 7 Key First Chapter Questions and Scene Structure work in the first chapter? Email Abigail with your thoughts or share on social media and tag her. Let's continue the conversation!     LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE BLURB (pulled from Goodreads) Everyone in Shaker Heights was talking about it that summer: How Isabelle, the last of the Richardson children, had finally gone around the bend and burned the house down. In Shaker Heights, a placid, progressive suburb of Cleveland, everything is meticulously planned—from the layout of the winding roads, to the colors of the houses, to the successful lives its residents will go on to lead. And no one embodies this spirit more than Elena Richardson, whose guiding principle is playing by the rules. Enter Mia Warren—an enigmatic artist and single mother—who arrives in this idyllic bubble with her teenage daughter Pearl, and rents a house from the Richardsons. Soon Mia and Pearl become more than just tenants: All four Richardson children are drawn to the mother-daughter pair. But Mia carries with her a mysterious past, and a disregard for the rules that threatens to upend this carefully ordered community. When old family friends attempt to adopt a Chinese-American baby, a custody battle erupts that dramatically divides the town—and puts Mia and Elena on opposing sides. Suspicious of Mia and her motives, Elena is determined to uncover the secrets in Mia's past. But her obsession will come at an unexpected and devastating cost…  Buy LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE >>   Find Abigail and Jennifer: Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.jenniferklepper.com/ IG: @abigailkperry | @jennifer_klepper Twitter: @abigailkperry | @jenklepper

"Between life and death there is a library, and within that library, the shelves go on forever. Every book provides a chance to try another life you could have lived. To see how things would be if you had made other choices . . . Would you have done anything different, if you had the chance to undo your regrets?" — Blurb for Matt Haig's bestselling novel, THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY  Abigail sits down with certified book coach Sharon Skinner to analyze the first chapter of THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY. This is one of Abigail's favorite reads in 2022 (it published in 2020), and it's also in Abigail's top reads. Sharon also loved THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY, and is an excellent coach to talk to about this book since Sharon specializes in TML's genre, (curio) speculative fiction.  Join Abigail and Sharon for a first chapter deep dive analysis of Matt Haig's bestselling, award-winning novel! Following the traditional format for these deep dive episodes, Abigail and Sharon discuss how the *prologue in disguise* and first chapter set up expectations for the big picture (using Paula Munier's 7 Key First Chapter Questions from her book THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS), and then they zero-in to examine each scene's structure (using Story Grid's scene analysis tools, some of these also used by Robert McKee).  In addition to the macro and micro analysis, Abigail and Sharon discuss: Curio fiction, what this is and why it's a valuable sub-category in speculative fiction What THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY is really about  Why the POV works well in this novel, and why it wouldn't work if we were too close to Nora's POV Why there is no one way to write (but how to use tips that can help)  Plus, more actionable advice and tips that you can apply to your writing!    Did you read THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY? What did you think of its first chapter?    Don't forget to read Diane Callahan's article on Tor: What Is “Curio Fiction”? Finding a Name for a Fantastical Subgenre   Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry |@SharonSkinner56 Instagram: @abigailkperry |  Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://bookcoachingbysharon.com/ | http://sharonskinner.com/ 

The first episode in a new Author Interview + Writing Tips and Assignments series on LIT MATCH! In today’s episode, Abigail pulls one of her favorite interviews from her  her old podcast (pub. 2020) and revamps it for the Lit Match listeners.  Abigail sits down with the bestselling author of the DIARY OF A WIMPY KID series, Jeff Kinney. Listen to this episode to get an inside look at the makings of Diary of a Wimpy Kid, writing comics, and other valuable writing tips.  Then, join Abigail for Part II of this episode, where Abigail explores five big takeaways from Jeff’s advice. Abigail follows each takeaway with a writing assignment that she encourages every writer to apply to their WIP, or at the very least, to their writing practice.   The 5 Big Writing Takeaways Include: Find inspiration from real events and then fictionalize them for fiction stories Develop characters who are human and relatable for a general audience Show how a character changes from beginning to end without  altering the rules of their universe Apply the 3-Act Structure to every story  Create a cast of various personalities     Find Jeff: www.wimpykid.com Find Abigail: www.abigailkperry.com   

After writing a book comes publishing it, and to do so (or if you want to do it well), you need to know your target readers and the market. One of the most important tools a writer, literary agent, editor, and publisher uses to give a quick, clear, and catchy idea of what a story is about—and what everyone can predict for sales—is comparable titles (or comps). That’s what Abigail covers in this episode. She pulls from her first-hand experience as an editorial intern and various insightful articles (linked below) to teach:  📖 What are comparable titles (comps)?  📖 Why do you need them if you want to publish your book? 📖 4 easy ways to find noteworthy comps  📖 4 essential requirements to verify if you have strong comps 📖 More!     Resources reference in this episode: Comp Title—An Elevator Pitch for Your Book by Andrea Bachofen How to Find Compelling Comps for Your Book by Star Wuerdemann  10 Ways to Personalize Your Query to Agents by Carly Watters  Must-Knows When Picking Comparable Titles by Abigail K. Perry   Want to sign up for Book Notes (a virtual book club with Savannah Gilbo and Abigail)? Learn more (and join us!) at: www.savannahgilbo.com/book-club 

We're back with the final episode!  Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS. This is a particularly special episode in the series being the final Harry Potter book and first chapter episode, as well as Abigail's favorite book in the series.   In this conversation, Abigail and Savannah discuss how the first chapter sets up expectations for the big picture and delivers a well-structured scene on the micro level (or small picture). To do this, they use tools like the seven key questions to ask about first chapters (Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS) and Story Grid's five commandments. Plus, Savannah and Abigail dig into other valuable topics like how this chapter is the most omniscient perspective in the series (and why this is important), the chilling and high stakes set up in this opening scene, and more.    Why do you think the first chapter in Deathly Hallows is great? We'd love to hear your perspective!   P.S. If you enjoyed these first chapter episodes, you might love Abigail and Savannah's virtual book club, Book Notes! Learn all about it (and join us!) here.    Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

Taking a different direction for this week’s episode, Abigail speaks directly to listeners about ten pieces of writing (and life!) tips she absorbed from what she considers her favorite in-person author presentation.  Last month, Abigail was lucky enough to attend bestselling author Fredrik Backman’s book tour for the third book in his Beartown series trilogy, THE WINNERS.  Abigail had been wanting to read Backman’s books for years but constantly failed to prioritize them on her reading list—until she saw Fredrik Backman was coming to town.  Now, Abigail easily and enthusiastically calls Fredrik Backman one of her favorite authors —of all time. She’s obsessed with his writing and ability to create characters—and even more so with his raw, sincere ability to answer thought-provoking questions.  In this episode, listen to the ten invaluable pieces of writing and life advice that Abigail learned from Fredrik Backman’s presentation. These lessons have sat with Abigail ever since she listened to him, and they offer advice and writing tips Abigail purposefully carries with her as she moves forward with her own writing and editing.    Find Abigail [email protected] IG & Twitter: Abigail K. Perry   Read THE WINNERS by Fredrik Backman Purchase here

We're back with book six! Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE HALF-BLOOD PRINCE. This is an extra special episode since HBP is Savannah's favorite book in the series—plus, both Abigail and Savannah agreed that this first chapter was the most difficult to analyze, at least so far in the series—which makes for a fun challenge and discussion.   In this analysis, Abigail and Savannah discuss how the first chapter sets up expectations for the big picture and delivers a well-structured scene in the small picture. They use tools like the seven key questions to ask about first chapters, taken from Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS, and Story Grid's five commandments of storytelling—along with other thoughts and opinions.   What do you think makes up the first chapter of HBP? We'd love to hear your perspective.    P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY   Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

Abigail sits down for a first chapter analysis of the bestselling and Reese Witherspoon Book Club pick, COUNTERFEIT. She takes a deep dive into the first chapter analysis—and she enthusiastically welcomes the author and editor of the book to join her in this dissection and discussion.  KIRSTIN CHEN is the New York Times best-selling author of three novels. Counterfeit, her latest and the book discussed in this episode, has sold the translation rights in seven languages and television rights have been optioned by Sony Pictures. Kirstin holds an MFA from Emerson College and a BA from Stanford University.  JESSICA WILLIAMS is an editor at William Morrow, an imprint of HarperCollins Publishers. She edits a range of fiction and nonfiction projects and is most interested in upmarket/literary fiction and narrative nonfiction/memoir with cultural underpinnings. Jessica completed a master’s in comparative literature at Georgetown University and worked at a literary and scouting agency in New York. Together, these women discuss how COUNTERFEIT’s first pages set up expectations for the story’s big picture. They use the seven key questions to ask about a first chapter in order to determine its strengths. (These questions are pulled from Paula Munier’s book, THE WRITER’S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS.) Afterwards, Abigail, Kirstin, and Jessica discuss how the first chapter, (seen as one scene) works on a scene (or small picture) level.  Full of wisdom, this episode includes additional discussion on invaluable writing and editing advice, like: Why to connect theme and plot twists in a story  How to use your POV to create tension in the narrative and plot  Why you shouldn’t get down on yourself if your manuscript needs multiple drafts Plus, more!     Follow Us: Abigail Perry: [email protected] | Twitter and IG: @abigailkperry  Kirstin Chen: kirstinchen.com | Twitter: @kirstin_chen | IG: kirstin.chen Jessica Williams: @JWillsNYC

We're back with book five! Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE ORDER OF THE PHOENIX. Abigail and Savannah return with a discussion on how the first chapter in the OOTP sets up expectations for the big picture and creates, to the reader's discretion, the most exciting first chapter in the Harry Potters series yet.  Once again, Abigail and Savannah use tools like the seven key questions to ask about first chapters (to analyze the big picture), taken from Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS, and Story Grid's five commandments of storytelling (to analyze the scene's "workability").  Along the way, Savannah and Abigail share perspectives and insights on important topics like: What is the inciting incident in the scene?   How various progressive complications (or conflicts) raise the stakes throughout the scene (and set up expectations for high stakes in the big picture)  Why readers need to care about the character in order for life or death stakes to work  How Harry's character is changing in big ways (and why this works better in YA vs. MG)  How Harry and Sirius' relationship evolves, even from chapter one Plus more!  What do you think makes up the first chapter of OOTP? We'd love to hear your thoughts.    P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY   Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

In today’s episode, Abigail sits down with another amazing Trellis Literary Management co-founder, Allison Hunter.  Allison is an expert in commercial fiction and shares exactly what she’s looking for in a manuscript wishlist, as well as other invaluable writing and publishing tips like: How to use comparable titles to pitch and market your book (with examples!) What makes a page-turning beach read Why secrets are imperative in engaging fiction  How publishing is moving away from the term “women's fiction” And more!    Do you want to send a query letter to Allison?  Check out her manuscript wishlist Follow Trellis Literary Management’s submission guidelines  Learn more about Allison Hunter   Find Us Twitter: @abigailkperry | @AllisonSHunter Instagram: @abigailkperry |  Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.trellisliterary.com/allisonhunter

We're back with book four! Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE GOBLET OF FIRE. Abigail and Savannah return with a discussion on how the first chapter in GOF sets up expectations for the big picture story using Paula Munier's seven key first chapter questions (THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS). They also nerd out about whether or not GOF is a thriller or an action story, why Frank models a sympathetic character, and much more! Abigail and Savannah then zero-in on the small picture and break down the first chapter of GOF with the five commandments (Story Grid).  What do you think makes up the first scene in GOF? If you don't remember it, feel free to read the first chapter of GOF—and then join us for this lively conversation.    P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast for writers: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY   Connect with us: Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

This is the third episode in a three-part series of episodes on how to write a query letter. Abigail teaches writers how to write the third (and final!) paragraph of the query letter, or the author bio.  Sometimes writers overthink the author bio, putting undue stress on themselves and this paragraph. This episode covers some tips on how to write this paragraph, som including: The Dos and Don’ts of the Author Bio (great tips especially pulled from Kelly Simmons blog on Career Authors!)  Do you need to include social media numbers? What to write if you don’t have a lot of details to put in bio Plus, Abigail shares one of her favorite tricks from Kelly Simmons’ article: Why a P.S. can create one final, special connection to the queried agent!    If you enjoyed this episode, don’t miss out on the other two episodes in the three-part series: Paragraph One: the Hook Paragraph Two: the Book (Blurb or Back Cover)   And don’t forget to check out Kelly Simmons’ article on Career Authors: How to Write a Query Letter

This is the second episode in a three-part series of episodes on how to write a query letter. In it, Abigail teaches writers how to write the second paragraph of the query letter, otherwise known as the blurb or back cover copy.  The back cover copy is the most important section in a query letter. Abigail shares important details writers need to make it stand out, some including:   3 Key Details Needed in Every Back Cover Copy: Character: Who is the main character? What do they want? What makes them ironic or the least likely hero for the story? Central/Main Plot: What is the main plotline? How does the character’s choices impact the plot and vice versa? How can you whittle this down so it’s concise and catchy? Hook: What makes your story different from others in the same genre?  ***Jessica Faust and James McGowan list and describe these in their awesome Bookends Youtube video. Check out their channel for more amazing writing tips and advice on all things publishing***   James Scott Bell’s 3-Sentence Method to Write a Back Cover: Name the main character, their vocation, and their situation when the story opens (also include what they want). But + “when this happens”: Think of the inciting incident of your story, what throws your character’s norm off course. Now + “death stakes”: What are the main stakes in your novel—physical, psychological, or professional? How are they spotlighted in your back cover, and why will they be raised as the story moves towards its climax?       The Secret: Great to include in your back cover!   Example: Abigail analyzes some back cover copy examples to model how a strong back cover includes the details and strategies discussed in this episode.    Additional Resources: Revision and Self-Editing for Publication (Jame Scott Bell) Query Letter Blurb (Bookends YouTube Channel)  The Five People You Meet in Heaven (Mitch Albom)

In the first episode of a three-part series of episodes on how to write a query letter, Abigail teaches writers how to write the first paragraph of their query letter. To do this, she covers important elements like: What a query letter is and why a writer who wants to traditionally publish needs one 4 essential details in every first paragraph  4-5 factors that determine a strong comp (comparable title) More! Plus! Abigail offers a free critique of the first paragraph to the first 10 writers only. Details on how to submit to Abigail and other examples and resources in this episode below:   I WANT A CHANCE AT ABIGAIL’S FREE CRITIQUE! Here’s what to do: Email Abigail at: [email protected]  Subject Title: Quick Query Tips Paragraph One Embed the first paragraph ONLY in the email Not required, but if you want to follow Abigail or share the show, go for it!  ***If you are not one of the first ten writers to email Abigail in the requested format, you may not get a response.***    FIRST PARAGRAPH EXAMPLE Dear AGENT’S NAME, I saw on Twitter that you love [SOMETHING THEY’VE SHARED PUBLICLY] and think you’d enjoy my book [YOUR BOOK IN ALL CAPS]. It is a [WORD COUNT and GENRE] that [SHORT LOGLINE] [OR] would entertain readers of [TWO COMPS THAT SHOW YOU UNDERSTAND YOUR GENRE AND ARE SOMETHING THE AGENT WOULD REPRESENT + BE ABLE TO SELL].    Additional Resources: Carly Watters: Ways to start your query letter